What were the strengths of my draft that I should be sure to keep?
The overall structure of my project is well organized. Everything flows in a logical manner. The conclusion and final sentence of my project is well-written.
What design choices were problematic, and how can I revise these?
I could include more subtle details from the original story. When I include confessions from the individual students, I can make it more fun and change their names to sound more like animal names or pig nicknames.
What multimodal elements can I add or revise to strengthen the rhetorical effect and credibility of my project?
I can add more elements that you see on a typical news broadcast. When I am speaking at the news anchor desk, I can have a relevant picture displayed up in the corner. I need to find a humorous picture of a wolf to use as the same wolf for all three campuses.
What are the most important changes I need to consider as I revise?
I need to keep in mind that this is news broadcast. Everything needs to be to the point like a broadcast would be, because people who watch want to receive their news fast.
Given the time and technology constraints of this project, what can I reasonably revise before the next due date?
I will be able to add transitions and news broadcast effects, however it will be hard to change the scripts since I have already recorded in a studio. If I need to make any changes to the script, I would have to record again.
My project is in iMovie, so unfortunately I cannot link it to this page, because I have not published it yet!