I used to hate write essay or paper, I do not know why. I just hate my grammar, but I can not do it right now. So I would like to correct and try my best to do it.
First I search informations, by read book again, and read the posts from my classmates. I got ideas. I followed the prof’s instruction
organized to be three parts.Actually this is my most weakness part to be organized. I alway got confused with my own idea that can not arranged to be a clear part.
Anyway, I tried my best to finish my essay.